The panty hose didn't work with my set and communicating clearly the object that is suppose to be. Refinements have been made and the set that I really liked is the one that is inverse from my previous design, because I been trying to fill the dress but it stands out more the rest of icons and becomes an anomaly. I feel this set works better as a set and I also had Andrea Morrris (Mo) a junior in Design, to look at my icons and fill out a set of questions that dealt with several points such as legibility, cohesion, form, craftsmanship and wether the story could be figure out for the set of icons.
refined icons with a light stroke
refined icons with a heave stroke
refined icons filled
refined icons with inverse of white to black
Mo's Comments
legibility is working but the only one that I'm having troubles
is communicating the rose
I showed her the other set and she felt that these were the most cohesive as a group.
She indicated about the heel of my shoe and one of the strokes being to small for the overall space that it took. There was a single line on my purse and that is the only line independent in comparison to the set. The rose she had doubts wether it was a rose or an ice-pick.
edited icons based on Mo's comments
A SPECIAL THANKS TO: 'MO' thanks for your comments and criticism
Karen, in addition to your final set with the outline component, I want you to expand the system to also include a version of "refined icons filled" (all black). This is similar to what I asked Julie to do. See her example here.
ReplyDeleteyou're welcome! they are looking nice.
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